i plan to go to Chinese Taiwan for my summer vacation. Chinese Taiwan is an island in the eastern china. the weather there is nearly the same as that in fuzhou, sometimes very hot in summer. but i can taste all kinds of delicious fruits. there are also many places of interests. Chinese Taiwan is famous for mount ali and riyuetan. i won’t miss the hot spring there. i will go swimming in the hot spring.
it’s really interesting. i can’t wait!
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1. Chinese Taiwan is an island in the eastern china. 改为Chinese Taiwan is an island in eastern china.
2.作者对祖国宝岛台湾充满向往，语法正确，意思连贯。